Page 1 colour test

Here's our first attempt at colouring LiaDR (the first panel of page 1) - 'our' being Southwell Jnr with me criticising and nit-picking:

As you can see, quite a muted colour scheme. Some highlights and shadow issues to work out, I think, but Southwell Jnr has done a nice job so far. Now the question is, what should I pay him? I'm assuming he will no longer accept payment in Pokemon cards...

Flatter and colourist rates, anyone?

Will post more of this page soon.

Edit:

Here's a tweaked version: